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Julie

If the characters are black, maybe bring that to the forefront in imagery of 70’s Psychedelic Afro-Rock.

One one hand that seems like quite an interesting idea. The swirls that were used a lot could look good.

On the other hand race is not something that I want to bring to the forefront. and the imagery could be quick to bring that to the front of peoples minds.

That and it seems like it would be really hard to animate.

Another Idea was to use a different style for the boy and the girl, using harsher marks for the boy and feather-light ones for the girl.